Wrong in an effective storytelling way? Or wrong in an out of character way?
I think more wrong in an effective storytelling way. Your fic is disturbing in the sense that you know as a reader that Sansa's been down this path of denial and willful blindness before, not disturbing in the sense of "OMG THAT'S NOT SANSA!1!1!!"
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I think more wrong in an effective storytelling way. Your fic is disturbing in the sense that you know as a reader that Sansa's been down this path of denial and willful blindness before, not disturbing in the sense of "OMG THAT'S NOT SANSA!1!1!!"